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Starcraft I RP

Discussion in 'StarCraft Original' started by Seradin, Oct 3, 2007.

Starcraft I RP

Discussion in 'StarCraft Original' started by Seradin, Oct 3, 2007.

  1. ijffdrie

    ijffdrie Lord of Spam

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    *ijffdrie starts building a techlab next to his factory and exchanges the one at his barracks with the one at the merc haven*
     
  2. ssjfox

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    *** Wow our little probe leader just doesn't have any luck, perhaps they should rebuild him as something else... but know that they are finishing their base I will have to keep looking out for observers and I still have to watch for any zerg forces tailing me even with this parasite in me, and as for those terrans I must keep my eye on them and figure out what they are doing in that odd science faclity.

    +++ Just a little bit longer and my plan to kill this parasite shall be complete, the psionic link may be able to kill the infected if removed and a good idea execpt when facing someone who can tap into that link....
     
  3. lurkers_lurk

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    ahh the everything is going along nicely soon the pathetic protoss and terrans will feel my wraith... wait who ordered those scourges to attack?

    grr, at least they will take down some of the enemies flying machines.
     
  4. ssjfox

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    *** Ahh that zerg commander looks a little distraught about those scourge attacking... perhaps the terran are doing something more than testing weapons and possibly messing up our psionics, they might be possibly affecting the zerg forces to... good perhaps they make it easier for me to get that queen if they really are.....
     
  5. Shadow Templar

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    ( I've been rather busy lately studying for midterms, but now their over its time I've got back inot this, and in style)

    For an unknown reason, someone put the production of more collosi on hold, instead ordering a Reaver. However, it is no ordinary Reaver. Built using part from the fabled Probe leader, this unique reaver is named The Slayer.
    The Slayer is capable of using the manufacturing plant inside itself to construct up to 8 plasma torpedoes. Plasma torpedoes are effective against air or ground targets, doing 40 splash damage. The Slayer is able to fire all 8 plasma torpedoes in rapid succession, dealing widespread chaos. Small Khaydarian embedded in its shell not only provide 150 shield points, but are also capable of powering low level structures which The Slayer is still capable of warping in.

    Taking the best of both worlds, Probe Leader is reborn, ready to avenge Auir. Emerging from the Robotics Facility, The Slayer fires his plasma torpeos into the swarm of Scourge, destroying them all and saving the Collosi.

    (Btw, i've been planning this for a short while. It seems a certain Twilight Archon has read my mind and foresaw my plan.....interesting)
     
  6. lurkers_lurk

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    * alone in the atmosphere three being gather together to judge the fate of this battle *
    "i say we should help the protoss for they are noble and strong." said the first.

    "i say we help the terrans for their mind is unlike any thing in the universe." said the second.

    " nay, i say we should help the zergs for evolution ways is the purist of all of the three" said the third.

    * they argued and argued till they started fighting with everything they got, unfortunately during the fight they didnt relize that they were getting closer to the planet. when they hit the surface of the planet the shockwave send them all to who they wanted to help in the first place except for one, but their bodys were so torn from the fighting they became spirits. *

    * the second one who had spoken merged with ijffdrie *

    * the third with lurkers_lurk *

    * but the last one wandered over the land looking for the protoss that he had sided with *

    ( not my best works, but not my worst either )
     
  7. ssjfox

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    You should have put that into the unit design competion I think it would have had a good chance, and yes, yes I did read your mind, I'm just good like that. ;) any way

    *** Ahh it seems my prediction was right, they have indeed brough the probe leader back as a new war machine, and quite a impresive one at that. It is a good thing I've forbiden this parasite from seeing what I do, this will be quite a nice surprise for those little zerg and paunchy water bag terran, but this parasite will not be a problem much longer soon that little queen will pop just like that midget zergling earlier....

    *** !!!!!!! what was that? That massive shockwave.... this energy is unlike anything I've ever felt before... a power so great that it dwarfs tassadar by far... ! the zerg and terran commanders.... their power.. it has become just like the energy that just fell.. they must have joined like me and tassadar... but wait I sense one more of these powers..

    +++ The twilight archon meditates to try and find this third power

    *** ahhh it appears this third power wanders our planet... in spirt form much like tassadar on char... one can only guess what this power will do and who it will join.
     
  8. lurkers_lurk

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    ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh* loses consciousness*
     
  9. Shadow Templar

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    My sensors have just detected a large electromagnetic pulse. Searching for the origin.......

    No origin found, no magnetic or unexplained electrical signatures found...

    It appears this is unexplainable, like it is extra-dimensional or mystic.....how odd, what could be the cause..time to investigate. Beep boop Bop!
     
  10. ssjfox

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    *** Ahh it seems the power was to great for the zerg/terran commanders to handle it seems they passed out, I wonder if they will make it through. Either way I guess I should seek out this power, it is obviously searching for something the way it is moving.

    [ So the twilight archon sets out on a search for this power to discover what it was. Using his psionic abilities he tracks down the immense power which could be down by a flea considering how much energy it was giving off. At last the archon stumbles upon the power on a small island just off the mainland using the shuttle he had used earlier. The power emitting the brightest light he had ever seen.

    *** ......... What are you?

    ? ? ?: Ahhh a protoss just what I've been looking for, and a powerful one at that to.

    *** Answer me what are you?

    ? ? ?: Quite a sharp tongue though

    *** I do not fear you NOW ANSWER ME

    ? ? ?: hahah little protoss do not say you do not fear me, no matter how stern you outside body is I can see into your mind and sense how much fear you really have, for I am XEL-NAGA

    *** !!!!!!!!!!! That's impossible! The xel-naga were wiped out by the zerg after they spawned them.

    ? ? ?: Ahh this would be true but there were three of us that were not there when this occurred, we were watching over you protoss and the terran, and when we found out what had happened one of us was actually overjoyed being so bold to state that the zerg were the perfect creation, the type that can even destroy its creator. The other one and I did not believe this and so we three departed, each watching over the race we favored, and so all three of us ended up here, and that's when we tried to decide which one we should help in this fight, and since we could not agree we fought not realizing we were coming to the planet and in the power we destroyed our bodies, my two brothers have already become one with the zerg and terran.

    *** I know of what you speak well, for I sensed your brethren in these two commanders and now I know what they are.

    ? ? ?: Yes so know I shall become one with you and help you in your battle.

    *** Wait who said I would allow that?! I have already become one with another one of my brothers I need no help from you!

    ? ? ?: I fear this is not your choice for if you are to defeat the zerg now that my brothers are in them, you will need me and you by far seem the strongest of all the protoss warriors here, most likely because of this fusion you spoke of earlier now join with me.

    *** I refuse.

    ? ? ?: I can cure you of that awful zerg infestation you have, and you will gain unimaginable power so what do you say.

    *** ........ I accept but I want control of your power and be able to pass it on if need be.

    ? ? ?: Very well young protoss now join with me.

    [ And so the twilight archon fuses with the xel-naga, becoming a creature never before seen to this world, the zerg and terran did not change since they have there own bodies, but with the archon being complete psionic his body is warped, no longer able to contain so much power, and a explosion similar to that of a terran nuclear bomb occurs, and from the light steps forth a creature similar to that of a zealot or dark templar in size and shape and the body is obviously protoss but the legs are like that of a humans for increased running speed, and the arms are much larger than normal protoss arms with psionic energy swirling around them but the biggest difference is the eyes. No longer are they that of a protoss but now they are something like that of a god. Eyes that swirl and burn with energy, changing from blue to black or red and than back such energy that seems like it could destroy something with a mere blink.

    Twilight Naga: Ahhhh such power, its beyond understanding, and the zerg parasite... it has been incinerated and I felt nothing... this is beyond belief.

    ? ? ?: Beep boop.

    Twilight naga: Who is there, show yourself or be destroyed.

    [ From behind a rock the X probe leader now in slayer form emerges.

    Slayer: What is this creature? Data banks have no recording, unit is consider to be highly dangerous and must be destroyed.

    [ And so the slayer launches 5 torpedoes at the naga but the naga destroys them before they get half way there

    Twilight Naga: Do not fear me slayer I am a protoss like you even if you do not realize it, that was some power I'm impressed.... I think you could do with some more.

    [ So before the slayer can do anything the naga passes some of his psionic energies to the slayer giving it a much more keen mind and a whole new set of abilities opens to it, for never before has a machine been able to use psionic energy and generate it.

    Twilight Naga- Now my slayer friend with that power I passed on some of my knowledge and now you know what I am so come let us go back to the base, I feel it is time to show myself.

    Woah it just hit me how incredibly long this is, I didn't even realize it I just got caught up into the story any way



    I herby apologize to shadow templar because I know he was working on something huge like this to ( I think) and the same apology to lurkers in case he was going to do something but let me just say please post what ever you had if it was long and we can all look at it and see your hard work appreciated, and if its better we can even use that for the story instead of mine so any way post if you did something, I would love to see it.
     
  11. LordKerwyn

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    The Ambassador beckons a probe over, "I have message for your master when you see him again. I will leaving this planet to rejoin my Lord on his journey here. We will send reinforcements when we can on our long journey through warp space. Our men currently stationed here will begin a campaign against the zerg in response to their assaults on the base here. I wish you luck. And me and my Lord will be here as soon as possible and we arrive, THE ZERG SHALL UNDERSTAND THE TRUE FURY OF THE PROTOSS!!!

    *The Ambassador steps through the Gateway and leaves the planet*

    *Less than a mile away the Immortal Captain gives a speech to his troops*

    "My Brethren! Our chance has come to strike back the zerg for their ATROCITIES AGAINST OUR, POEPLE!!! Watch each others backs and kill as many as you can. MOVE OUT!!!

    *The Captain and his soldiers (12 Zealots, 2 Imortals, 2 High Templar, The Captain, and 8 Scouts providing air cover for those who havnt kept track) begin a march tworards the zerg base, killing any zerg who chose to try and fight the platooon.
    When the platoon arrives at the entrance to the zerg base they begin the siege...*
     
  12. Shadow Templar

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    Meanwhile....

    As soon as the psionic energies connect with the slayer he undergoes a transformation. His crystals grow large and sharp, crackling with the energy they let off. They now give him the power to create a large, powerful shield. His power source is transformed. His torpedoes are now empowered with anti-matter, the fists of the Xel-Naga. His processors and electronics are 10x faster than any supercomputer. However there is one change no one could foresee...

    "What is this..",he thinks to himself, for the first time. Somehow he has been given a mind of his own. He now fears, hopes, dreams, questions. He is no longer just a computer....

    He stands in front of an unknown figure that he strangely knows everything about... His body still crackling from the transformation. This is the beginning.

    ( yeah, im not gonna lie, I wanted some Xel-Naga power of my own, thanks for it though, things should get really interesting)
     
  13. ssjfox

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    Yeah I figured shadow and I was thinking you might be making a giant post like mine to get power so I thought it was only fair to give you some of it, after all I took tassadar's power (but than again i made like 600 words and a brand new story, for the record if you've read the lore thing on the front page you will notice that they will say tassadar's spirt is probably still out there, so just like to say, I called it. :p) but still it wouldn't be fair to take it all and this will make a much more interesting stroy I think.

    Fell free to post again since its not a double post any more and since I got no more ideas right now.
     
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    nice man you should have entered it
     
  15. ssjfox

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    *** Ahhh it seems not only have you been given ablities to control your energy into actual ablities, but it seems you have been given a mind after all, excellent I was hoping for this. Hmm... but your still like a reaver and no matter how much attacking ablilties you have or have fast you think you still move slower than almost all other things. We shall have to fix that, before we go back to the base, I will teach you how to manipulate your psionic energy, not only to use ablities but to increase your speed...

    [ And so for the next few hours the twilight naga teachs the slayer (even though now it has clearly become something new, something that deserves a new name, but that is up to him) how to control the psionics that he had given him, and before all else teaching him how to put that energy under his body to "hover" as you could call it, speeding up his movement speed to that of a zergling, but he also taught him how to control his psionics in other ways. But even though this was important the naga really did it to test how fast a machine with a real mind can think (This urge to make new things and study those creations obviously come from the xel-naga with in him) and this living computer out preformed all of his expectations.

    +++ I must be weary of this one, even if it is only a fraction of my power in him, he could become just like the zerg and the twilight becoming just like the naga.

    +++ is inner thoughts.
     
  16. lurkers_lurk

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    ok sorry it took me so long to respond, @ ssjfox i was hoping eveyone would continue on with the twist i put in and it seems they did. oh and i was thinking that those three were part of what was left of the zel'naga.

    back to the seige to the front for my base.

    * the lurkers ive placed at strategic location suddenly starts to hammer the zeaots, one of the high templers manage to cast a psi storm before they both died by queens back up by scourges which killed the scouts, then the zerglings came, wave after wave of them just slaughtered the immortals and the captain. they didnt go far into my base, especially since the edge of my base ( that would be the creep ) is at the chock points. *

    ohhh, my head its so...
    well, well, well, it looks like my brothers have decided to help in this battle, hahahahahaha yes let there be death and destruction across this world.
    who said that?
    oh its just me one of the last living spirits of the zel'naga
    what!?
    thats what i said
    my....my psi, it is more powerful. ( according to lore all the zergs had psi it was just weak. )
    yes, all zel'nagas have powerful psi but for some reason we know not the psi like to specialized for each zel'naga
    whats this, the protoss had attacked and we lost the parasite in the archon, hehe he is probable dead, so they want to be serious now, no matter we'll just watch what they do next.

    ( ok im going to bed, i think ill add twist when i feel things are starting to get either repetitive or boring. good night everyone. )
     
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    After hours of learning my mind feels like exploding...so many things that my simple data banks could never have thought of back then.....its seems like an eternity ago. My mind wants to keep on going but my body needs a break. The transformation has put my metal parts under great stress, they need repaired. I thank my new teacher and with my first act of defiance I transform myself into pure energy. I zip off into the horizon, at supersonic speeds, back to base. I think to myself how much more awesome this is than hovering...pshhhh

    As I come to a stop in base everything is in chaos...what could be going on?
     
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    *** Tsk that fool, there is a reason I taught him how to hover and not fly like that, it takes far to much energy and with an inorganic body like his it will easily fall apart if he keeps doing that, it is far to difficult technique for something inorganic and even organic creatures have trouble with it, metal can not handel being turned into psionic energy like that...!! something is wrong, the slayer (still needs a new name) is in shock, something must have happened, tsk I guess I dont have a choice I'll have to follow his example but I'm not done teaching him yet, I'll yell at him later.

    [And so the naga also flys back to the base and sees why the slayer was in shock. All of the probes in the base were running around attacking things warping in random buildings and the photon cannons were obviously malfunctioning as they were shooting all friendly targets.

    *** ! it seems I was right there terran have devloped something indeed, well my little slayer friend is lucky, if he hadn't got his new mind he would be malfuncting to.
     
  19. Shadow Templar

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    I come to a stop with a clunk..my metal part are meeting critical stress. No matter, there is obviously something wrong.

    " you probe, what is the matter"
    Probe: pancakes......immortals have fallen......lamppost...ambassador has left......build more pylons, not enough psi.... the number you have called cannot be reached, please try again later.....
    " hmmm there's only one thing to do...link to the psi matrix"
    I link up and explore the matrix...hmm there appears to be a foreign energy signature....with a meer thought I destroy it and everything goes back to normal, the chaos stops.....what ever that was, it couldn't be good.Who could have done this?
     
  20. ssjfox

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    *** Slayer!!! What do you think your doing, using an ablity like that without even knowing what it will do to you? From now on you will not use a new technique without consulting me first, whether you have a mind or not you do not know the power of which you hold. Look at you, your about to fall apart, well either way go get repaired I still have much to teach you find me when your done, I'll be leaving now since that ambassodor isn't here I will take my leave and wait for his return and never do something like that again you fool.

    +++ He's already becoming defiant this could be bad... I will have to watch him closely.