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Share your poems

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by darkone, Dec 28, 2008.

Share your poems

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by darkone, Dec 28, 2008.

  1. Meee

    Meee New Member

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    Uh, wow. It's not that good...
    And now that you've said it, I have to prove that I really shouldn't. So here's two more pieces, there'll probably be third one related to them, but it's way too late to do it today >.<


    I.

    With Mind a realist and Heart idealist
    Thinker is thrown into land beyond mist

    He asks his companion what sights to be seen
    Will there be fairies or things to be feared

    The other won't answer directly the question
    He'd show him a vision his dreams revelation

    Through forest walks Stranger supported by cane
    One eye of his ice is one eye of his flame

    Gloves on his hands back covered by cape
    Fair breeze around him his feet firm on earth

    The Thinker wonders what's going on here
    Is it the Heaven or shall he feel fear

    It's as if the Stranger befriended Elements
    But how can it be? It does not make sense

    Ponder he would but time would not wait
    The vision is yet to show him things great

    He'd see a huge claw a scale and a tail
    The horns and the wings all covered by flame

    A creature most fearsome of power and might
    And yet it shows wisdom and clear and bright mind

    He thinks of experience of magic and stories
    Is this beginning or maybe the end of his

    Then vision shatters a cruel awakening
    Was it a dream? Is there such a thing?

    There is no record in books there's no proof
    From such an image he shall stay aloof

    Why would one eager for this kind of place?
    He could not fathom no reason nor sense.


    II.

    With Mind a realist and Heart idealist
    Steps Dreamer into the land of malice

    Where sin runs rampant and light is scarce
    Are truth and hope there or are they farce?

    He wonders why has he been summoned
    What wicked creature would want him damned?

    Who would observe his will being broken
    His hope being crushed from dreams him awaken?

    He tries to get out but way is not clear
    Will he ever leave or will he stay here?

    He stumbles blindly trying to find them
    Where have they gone? Are they even there?

    The dragons the magic all of his friends
    Where are the knights where the Elements?

    He feels as if this place were true Hell
    His visions and dreams beginning to fade

    He feels as if Heart of his was long bleeding
    While there's someone there watching and grinning

    A friend tries to help but no he's not right
    The dreamer will find him him will he fight

    The friend tries again he says that he knows
    But Dreamer is lost he clings to his hopes

    He's hearing the reasons he's being told rules
    What's it he sees though is world full of fools

    He's trying to tell them that this is no life
    By all regulations they have been made blind

    It's not through act of walking or breathing
    One only lives if one can keep dreaming
     
  2. KuraiKozo

    KuraiKozo New Member

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    Uranus lol =D
    *hasn't read it yet but will*
    posting more won't make the first less awesome xD
     
  3. Meee

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    Now THAT is awesome.
     
  4. Light

    Light Guest

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    I know its not funny
    But its the best I could do


    *runs away with his michaevellic (michaevellic? yay I'm a poet) spam*
     
  5. Ximnipot69

    Ximnipot69 New Member

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    Light, I think the term you are looking for is Machiavellian.
     
  6. Light

    Light Guest

    I was about to correct myself but I was too busy running away.
     
  7. KuraiKozo

    KuraiKozo New Member

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    Uranus lol =D
    *watches* is it just me or is the quality of threads plummeting faster than the US economy?
     
  8. Meee

    Meee New Member

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    It's been for quite a while now. Weren't you supposed to comment on something btw?
     
  9. Ximnipot69

    Ximnipot69 New Member

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    Well then, let me share an ode to punctuation and a little something I wrote about an year gao...

    dot
    dot, we need you
    even though we sometimes forget you
    even though we sometimes abuse you
    even though we sometimes overly use you
    we still need you, dot​


    I in your eyes see
    a summers day
    a picnic blanket
    icecream and cookies
    when you smile

    I in your eyes see
    happiness
    friendship
    love
    when you smile

    I in your eyes see
    togetherness
    a future
    our future
    when you smile
     
  10. darkone

    darkone Moderator

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    Hey what the ****? I made this thread so people could share what they have made. If you don't like my thread, you don't have to post in it.
     
  11. Meee

    Meee New Member

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    She wasn't talking about thread itself but the crap people (Meee included) post in it - and other threads too

    To be clear, I mean spam, not the poems
     
  12. Kaaraa

    Kaaraa Space Junkie

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    'Tis a cold dark winter night,
    And their beady eyes are filled with fright.
    Bounding through the fluffy white snow
    They are, this troupe of little hares.
    On, and on, and on they go
    Searching for a warm nest they all can share.
    Finally through the worst of the storm,
    They spy a truly gargantuan form;
    Its conical neck rose up into the night,
    And the little hares trembled at the might
    Of each breath the creature drew.
    Yet so tempting was this mountain of fur
    to these bunnies, amongst cold they could not endure
    that they sought shelter under the beast
    until the next morning, when the storm had ceased.

    Prompted by a story my art teacher told at assembly, about how he found wild rabbits sleeping under his pet llama to get out of the weather.
     
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    [​IMG]

    Credit goes to FurFag 7221.
     
  14. darkone

    darkone Moderator

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    Poems, not pictures.
     
  15. Babmer

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    I am running from something, I don’t know
    I am searching for something, which way to go?
    I am trying to separate what’s real
    I’m running in a wheel

    From green to red our days pass by
    Waiting for a sign to tell us why
    Are we dancing all alone?
    Collect some stars to shine for you
    And start today there are only a few
    The sign of times my friend

    ..... yes.... a poem....



    Credit to: In Flames
     
  16. Light

    Light Guest

    Roses are red
    violets are blue
    in Soviet Russia
    poem writes you!
     
  17. Babmer

    Babmer Guest

    rofl, that made me grin

    Roses are red
    Violets are blue
    Anime sucks
    and i need the loo
     
  18. overmind

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    You asked for poems, you're the one that's not posting them.

    Roses are red,
    Violets are blue,
    At these types of poems,
    ****ty, gets you.
     
  19. darkone

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    You're spamming, I am asking for real poems, not just toying around.

    I haven't posted any, cause I haven't been up to writing any at the moment.
     
  20. Space Pirate Rojo

    Space Pirate Rojo New Member

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    Canada, eh?
    Roses are red,
    Violets are blue,
    I'm writin' poetry,
    S'all pretty coo'.