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Share your poems

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by darkone, Dec 28, 2008.

Share your poems

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by darkone, Dec 28, 2008.

  1. Gasmaskguy

    Gasmaskguy New Member

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    ...There is something seriously wrong with this forum.

    No, I am not talking about this thread, but how the person who makes the last post on a page accidentally creates a duplicate on the beginning of the next. I've seen it 3 or so times now, is it coincidence, or...?
     
  2. Ximnipot69

    Ximnipot69 New Member

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    my roses are dead
    my violets too
    I like cake
    how about you?

     
  3. overmind

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    I've noticed that a few times too ursa.

    Roses are red,
    violets are blue,
    some poems rhyme
    but this one doesn't...
     
  4. KuraiKozo

    KuraiKozo New Member

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    my friend made this poem:
    Blind and Ignorant

    Skating past us, our lives breathe in freedom and yet bridled by responsibility.
    And, in our youth we seek the wistful rebuke times
    When school is only something to say 'goodbye' to,
    We see realization in our mistakes of out crying curiosity.

    To leave the mold to which we out grew and
    Endure the bridles of deceit and the blind,
    Of an endeavoring environment.

    An environment to crack and eliminate our souls,
    Our spirits, and our newly shaped selves
    For we are ill prepared to face the world.

    Children in cells scream to be free
    From the shackles that restrict and restrain.
    They scream to roam, scream to feel alive-
    And to leave.

    Why do the children scream so?
    Can they not see the protection of ignorance?
    Naive within nurture and soothing care-
    Like the innocence of God's beloved children.

    Angels - without this sense of care - become injured
    Harmed, tainted, and rather jaded.
    Blinded within their wishes.

    The ones who are released, free to fly their dreams:
    The children before whom reached their time . . .
    They screamed too.

    They scream to be in Mother's soothing hands
    And protected from reality and the bittersweet venom that it feeds.
    They want to be safe, secure, protected, and to worn the ones safe:
    Freedom is harsh, painful, and deceitful.

    But, ignorance is bliss. They do not listen . . .
    They never listen, they are only fixated to freedom
    Beyond the grave constriction they writhe within.

    And, to end this poem of numb belligerence, chorus, and song . . .
    Let the children dance on and let them sing and them turn,
    As all around them in a blind eye
    The city continues to burn.
     
  5. Ursawarrior

    Ursawarrior New Member

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    touche mizani
     
  6. AcE_01

    AcE_01 Active Member

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    Here, i thought of a proper one this time darkone =]

    ACe

    There was a boy named ACe,
    who likes to bash peoples face
    with his plus one mace.
    Everytime he saw a race,
    he tied up his shoelace
    but there wasnt enough space,
    so he said "get out of my place
    you BIG DISGRACE!"
     
  7. Ursawarrior

    Ursawarrior New Member

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    They say that cosmo was dense,
    for betting his wife for five cents,
    she finds out, she'll be mad,
    if he lose, he'll be sad,
    i reckon the pain is intense
     
  8. MarineCorp

    MarineCorp New Member

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    That doesn't make any sense.

    i continued the poem for you ursa
     
  9. KuraiKozo

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    lol randomy poems i made:

    -Uses-
    Abuse me. Use me. Consume me. Lean on me. Abandon me when I am through.
    Because I am a crutch.
    A crutch: an ugly word for an ugly person like me.
    Something to be used at will, at disposal or need.
    Never needing to be more, only needed to help you.

    Picking you up when you fall.
    Supporting you when you are weak and broken
    An unfortunate break on the sliver of your life.
    But I am here.

    Here to support you if you need me.
    Here to help you so you won’t fall.
    Here to keep you safe from those who try and trip you.
    Ready to be disposed of when I am done.

    -Only words.-
    Words, only words.
    How come they never come out right?
    even in writing?
    Even when we think, we don’t think right.

    A useless writer with a brilliant tool
    A blessed thought with no mind to behold it
    A silver cry on deaf ears
    A beautiful sight to blind eyes

    One treasure for each man, one sin for each finger
    One truth for every tree, a lie for every leaf
    to all that is good, there becomes darkness
    the higher you are, the longer the shadow of deceit.

    broken minds thrown into the norm
    confessions sought in pools of blood
    a seed among the fields of flowers.
    Nothing in the souls of those who don’t believe.

    they took it all: all the tools, the thoughts, the cries, the sights.
    now what is left? left of your treachery?
    useless writers, empty heads, deaf ears, blind eyes.
    All because the words that no one will read.

    No one will read these words...
    lost in the flood of text,
    gone like love.

    -Invisible-
    my eyes see it, do you see?
    The way far off none shall ever be
    unreached dreams and lost potential
    things that seem so essential
    do you see it?

    Broken molds bent by the confines they are kept in
    Burning trees falling to ashes of those that never win
    torn letters on the crook of their arms
    all their hollow lies and false charms
    can you see it?

    The people who trip so others will look
    fish gasping, strangled by a hook
    birds who cannot fly in the smoke of clouds
    boats that crash into one another’s bows
    will you see it?

    The freezing ice that slicks the street
    the fallen houses that collapse to no feat
    plastered blood on the white walls.
    a dead person, tumbling as he falls
    when shall it be seen?

    All the unocticed...
    all the unspoken, unbroken
    swept beneath our robes, never to be seen.
    invisible to our eyes.
     
  10. ijffdrie

    ijffdrie Lord of Spam

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    my poëms are in dutch


    HAHA!
     
  11. Ximnipot69

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    Post them anyway Lenga. Don't be shy, we'd love to read them.


    Möte
    vi två bland skuggorna
    hör stormen viner
    står där tillsammans
    håller om varandra
    mina armar runt din midja
    mina vingar svepta runt oss
    skyddar oss från vinden
    skyddar oss från regnet
    glad för att få vara där
    tacksam för allt du gett mig


    Vara där
    vill vara där
    hos dig
    stötta
    lyssna
    bara vara

    ensam
    bortglömd
    en stilla tår

    andetag
    en axel
    en arm

    närvaro
    stöd
    tröst

    hopp
    ett ljus
    lösning
     
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  12. Meee

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    With Mind a realist and Heart idealist
    How can one stab heart and stay alive?

    Mind knows how to move, knows what to do
    Yet Heart will not follow it is such a fool

    Held back by dreams that will not occur
    How can the Mind the future ensure?

    Mind is aware that way is one
    Silence the Heart or be undone

    Won't though Heart bleeding to cold of ice
    Lead both of the pieces to one demise?

    Maybe it's wrong it doesn't know right
    Shouldn't instead be stabbed the Mind?

    But Heart's a dreamer knows of no rule
    It would be swallowed by the world cruel

    Both can't be right they contradict
    Which one should go which to let live?

    Thus question is asked again and again
    Maybe kill both, spare going insane
     
  13. KuraiKozo

    KuraiKozo New Member

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    meee, i love you, that was epic. you make it or find it somewhere? if you made it, omg @_@
     
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    Thanks. Yes, I made it.
     
  15. overmind

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    wow, that's awesome.
     
  16. EatMeReturns

    EatMeReturns Happy Mapper Moderator

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    I can't find Gregario... it didn't come up on the forum search.

    Here's a more recent one...

    Who goes unnoticed but seen by all
    Who stands up as the world falls
    Who can not, will not, shall not be stalled-
    I am.

    What completes the cycle of life and death
    What transfers the soul to the next
    What reaps the sorrow in every breath-
    I am.

    When time ends and the next begins
    When shadows fall and silence smothers the din
    When the bell tolls and arise death's kin-
    I am.

    Where dusk falls eternally darkening
    Where voices fail to absolute muting
    Where fear is not and live is nothing-
    I am.

    Why the bird has stopped its tune
    Why writing fades and erased are all runes
    Why the blade no longer gleams under pale moon-
    I am.

    How tears drop from faces of who dies
    How calls of help never arise
    How up and high the rest flies-
    Lost-
     
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    I just dug up the stuff I wrote in highshcool.

    here's one

    The Urge to Fight

    Is this the wring
    with hands of greed
    bear satisfied gifts
    to urge my needs?

    Is this her voice
    when anger is sure,
    the woman who cared
    and my illness she cured?

    Why does she anger
    at life she has made
    when I alone fall
    to hide in my shade.

    I feel her heat rise
    but I do not see why,
    do I greet the pain
    Do I act as a lie?

    Do I oppose her thoughts
    and speak my truth,
    a quiet fight unfolds
    a revolt I will lose.
     
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  18. KuraiKozo

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    *gives meee a medal*
    you are now more awesome than me for that poem.
    wow, it was epic, i'm not even gonna lie. it was really good and captured the feeling correctly, marry me O O

    j/k at the last part, but it's epically good, you should keep writing ^ ^
     
  19. darkone

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    The poems you guys write, make mine look nubbish.
     
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    Here is one i made like when i was 5

    I found a little bug
    It grew and grew and grew
    it ate me

    my mother never found me
    but she got eaten too