-=[Zealot Picture!]=-

Here is my zealot picture that took me three day's to do! , I only traced the outline so It kinda guided my limit's of the zealot itself! , please tell me what You think because I love it and so should You all! (I think!) , please leave comment's and vote and also some feedback would be lovley so I can try on differnt thing's and focus a bit more on thing's that ain't right and/or thing's that just don't mix! , thankyou all! and enjoy!

Zealot picture by coreyb:

[img width=670 height=624]http://i240.photobucket.com/albums/ff112/CoreyBrock/Myprotosszealotbycoreyb.jpg[/img]

And yet again , thankyou all for viewing!

 

Although the shading is average, I love the psi blade look. I'll give you a good rating.

 

Thank's for the freeback Josh! , You are alway's a good friend!

 

I am having a feeling of deja vu. I seem to remember a thread exacly like this and my comment was it looked good and the only improvement would be the addition of color

 

And I guess this need's colour? , nah i ain't a colour person! but still ! , all feedback is good!

 

nice work coreyb, was it originally this faint? or is it the scanner

 

It's the scanner , it's quite old , the pic in real life is ALOT better , I can tell You right now people!

 

that sucks, stupid scanner

 

WHA??? , picture or scanner????

 

the scanner man it sucks, its a good picture

 

Thank's everyone!

 

oh, so it's the scanner, the scanner is really bad then

 

Yeah sorry guy's! , doesn't mean it ain't good tho!

 

You need to work on proportions and lighting when you shade. Also, the cross hatching needs a lot of work as right now there is no real distinctions between light->light gray->gray->dark gray->black->super black. You seem to have three shades and are all very coarse. Use more straight lines for a finished look, this looks a bit traced right now. Straight edges are your best friend in everything, even organic things. Do something with the background, white is never an option, even if there's no visible lighting, make one up lightly so there is some contrast in the background.

Finally, PS it and add color, don't color a sketch, if you want to do color start knowing you'll do color and don't cross hatch and all that.

 

Wow that is some good info there man , thank's!!!

 

Hey now i remember this. You made a thread about it before but the picture was from a camera shot of the drawing.

Didn't I suggest a scanner but you said it didn't work?

 

Yep! , but I fixed it!

 

Fixed the poll options, "Not Bad" should be better than "Mediocre"

 

Ok thank's! , I thought medicore in the middle because medi and medium , so it's in the middle! , sorry

 

only voted good because of the bad hand writing LOL! just kidding..... nice pic