Very nice, although the end wasn't exactly what I expected. Spoiler I mean, they just let him swim to his death after saving them? And what about what happens next? They say they met the boogyman and stuff in some city ruins, and everything is written in the past tense. So they have survived beyond the point of where the story is now. There had better be more later on, because this was to good to end after only a couple chapters. D:
Well as it says at the top of the page: "New Chapters Every Week - Ish" So the end isn't the end - just a break in the story until he releases the next chapter. Spoiler And honestly after that description of Fraction I don't think I'd say a word either. The way I see it swimming around the Gulf of Mexico would eventually lead to Cuba anyway.
Lol, true. Might just work. Also, I just checked the archive and noticed it was updated recently. Seems like there's more to come indeed.
