Shadow-angel

6i, ijffdrie am gonna try to start a virtual series(although it is gonna cost me much time, so i wont update very much) called shadowangel, it is a combination of scifi and fantasy. i will post the first scene of the first episode "the shadow and the flames". The show starts in another universe, but i plan to let them reach our galaxy in another point of the series, although it might be a year before i reach that cause i aint no fast writer. it wil start as a light series, but will get progressively darker.
the series will have a small amount of regulars, meaning 1, but it will have a large amount of recurring characters and the CGI will probably be to expensive for a real series. Comment/discuss in this thread


(virtual series means im gonna put the script here)

 

Comment/discuss what exactly? You haven't shown us anything yet

The idea itself is sound, but that's about all that can be said at this point

 

the first episode will be intoducing two of the most important characters
shantua: the only clan lord left standing in the fight against the elementals, the magical alien invaders that took over Clonoia(the home planet of the shantua)
lenga: the misterious demonoid being who lost his memory

did i mention there is gonna be a character dedicated to all you people in the show, kurai's char will be introduced the first episode

 

note to readers:
lenga-him is nothing like lenga-me, i just really lik the name

 

I'd have to see it in work, but I don't like how everything is supposed to be the same/similar (all races humanoid, all having clan structure)

 

i said nearly all races

and the clan structure is there to help with the diversity since every clan could live miles from the others borders, and without a central government, all clans have their own unique culture

 

=O
i can always help if you need it, drie~
being a writer, i know a few strands here and there =3
and i'm honored to be in your book *bows*

 

not book
script



and you will be named ringmaster kurai, you will be the clan lord of a destroyed clan, that was ravaged by the elementals and a clan that allied themselves witth them; The Dragonring clan, against whom you now hold a grudge

 

A grudge? Ain't I from Dragonring?

 

Dragonring will be kinda destroyed

 

aww, that's a shame...
Well Universe should be big enough for some more dragonclans anyway

 

they dont have a dragon, they just revere one that came through a portal, which shall be a crucial element in the series

 

I didn't say they were/had dragons

 

no, but you prolly thought or hoped it

 

Not really?
I assumed they are the same race as Kurai's clan which didn't seem to be dragons

 

both clans consist mainly of clonoians

 

*thinks* so are we gonna have races like prtoss and such? or our own indivudual races?
and alright, script =/= book
if you need any drawings tho *cause i so would* give me desritptions and i'll see what i can do ^-^

 

first a small description of ringmaster kurai

she is standing on a flying disc of about 1 meters width, she wears long robes that are used to conceal the two wrist devices and two ankel devices where several darts and weapon discs are stored, you are a vast and agile mover, and a very mean fighter, quickly manuevring around enemies. Your disc can fly everywhere

you are the first soldier of the supersoldier program

 

good, now physical apperanance plz, like a human, skin color? hair?

 

species:clonoian(1)
eye color: red
skin color: yellow-orangish
hair color: red
cristal(1) color: orange
length: 1 m 82 cm

(1): clononoain species, humanoid, between 1m 55 and 2m 25 in normal situations, female shlightly longer than male,
differences betweeen humans are very minor since they evolved from the same beings,
differences: the clonoians have no pupils, or eye-white, just an iris, their teeth are slightlysharper, and their bloodways are just under the skin, they also have cristals on the top of their hands

if you like sending in suggestion to make a race more distinct, please do, i am not good at that