Scolarion - First ever sc2 cast - Nerchio vs Lucifron

Hey guys! I was always really attracted towards casting so here is the first cast I have ever done so please be gentle Would love some feedback so I know what I can do better. If you guys like it I will cast the rest of the series and a hopefully a lot more games after that! Thanks in advance and hopefully you will enjoy my effort!

Link: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=O-18lIcNuOk

 

good job,

- you need a little more practice, you need to get a flow going... as in you spend a little too much time searching for your words
- if you don't know much about a player, look him up.
- i like your accent
- talk more about the builds/timings
- get more excited

overall good job...

 

Hey thanks for the reply m8, very useful tips
And yeah I was kinda lost for words sometimes and the excitement could use a lot of work aswell, will work on the tips!