Re: 5) It's about the Protoss sterilizing the planets

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by NateSMZ, Oct 10, 2007.

Re: 5) It's about the Protoss sterilizing the planets

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by NateSMZ, Oct 10, 2007.

  1. NateSMZ

    NateSMZ New Member

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    pretty good... didn't really get passion from it - but was ok
     
    NateSMZ, Oct 10, 2007
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    Yeah I agree. Wasn't really much but it still has a good composition.
     
    josh, Oct 11, 2007
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    Eh, it was OK....Too cold, you know? Like you didn't care. And the third paragraph doesn't make sense.
     
    Fenix, Oct 11, 2007
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  4. MeisterX

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    I think it makes sense. It just....

    There's no emotion in the words, to me.
     
    MeisterX, Oct 11, 2007
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    i can't relate the poem to its title
     
    BnechbReaker, Oct 11, 2007
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