Re: 4) Sonnet of the Dominion Ghost

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by NateSMZ, Oct 10, 2007.

Re: 4) Sonnet of the Dominion Ghost

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by NateSMZ, Oct 10, 2007.

  1. NateSMZ

    NateSMZ New Member

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    decent poem, the rhyme scheme was carried well
     
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    Nice rhyme!
     
    -LT-, Oct 11, 2007
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  3. BnechbReaker

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    i found it quite hard to follow the rhythm, maybe it's just me
     
    BnechbReaker, Oct 11, 2007
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  4. NateSMZ

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    good concept carried thru the last line... the lines just didn't quite live up to it - but good effort
     
    NateSMZ, Oct 12, 2007
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    reminded me of starcraft ghost nova
     
    ijffdrie, Oct 12, 2007
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    A sonnet is usually about love...But I couldn't find any given meaning to this, it was about a ghost's pain... Is that all?
     
    Darktemplar_L, Oct 16, 2007
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