Re: 13) Untitled

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by NateSMZ, Oct 10, 2007.

Re: 13) Untitled

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by NateSMZ, Oct 10, 2007.

  1. NateSMZ

    NateSMZ New Member

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    nice lil rhyme, had a sing-song feel
     
    NateSMZ, Oct 10, 2007
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    Hells yeah go probes
     
    BirdofPrey, Oct 10, 2007
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    *sniff* that was...beautiful *sniff*
     
    Meee, Oct 10, 2007
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    ha, i like :)

    very nice
     
    headstock, Oct 11, 2007
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  5. -LT-

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    Great poem. It should be called ''The Probe'' or something.
    This is so true. :good:
     
    -LT-, Oct 11, 2007
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    kuvasz Corrections Officer

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    Such simple topic presented in a great style, I like it!
     
    kuvasz, Oct 11, 2007
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    this is such a cute poem, definitely worth a vote
     
    BnechbReaker, Oct 11, 2007
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  8. NateSMZ

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    I'll repeat that I expect to hear children chanting this in the near future... it was pretty well crafted - good job... just not my cup of tea
     
    NateSMZ, Oct 12, 2007
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