Original Song, can work on SC map?

Some days ago doing some music, I play on my Synthesizer something like the starcraft map music.
And I started to work it a little.

Still not finished, in fack in the ending to close this demo I loose the way of the atmosphere a little
But I would like to know how I am going so far..

http://dark-star.com.ar/Fotos/ZergMap.mp3

 

I am very impressed. I like it overall. Nice drum beat. The guitar that comes in the middle isn't very Zergy though, I think. Needs dist. First half was definitely the better one, as you pointed out yourself.

 

good song better then icould do =)

 

I have a C&C soundtrack that came with Tiberian Sun that has stuff that sounds a lot like this. Good stuff.

 

oo very nice. I like it, good job! =]

 

Sounds like a nice soundtrack.

 

ohh thanks everyone, I really did not know what to think about the song becouse is not my usaul music style. I have a style more acoustic-melodic.
And I want it opinions becouse i need to know if i keep working in the song, adding 3 or 4 minutes and trying to working all its parts and times with different atmosphere to make a song that does not get tired listening it several times like a real song map. And then a good mastering.

If i do all that i will try to sell it and see if blizzard buy it... I read in their Job section, how i need to send the songs to offer them.

The middle guitar i added becouse it reminds me the terran songs.
About the tiberium sun i will try to lissen it, I know only the RA3 songs.

 

looks like this thing needs to be revived

 

THIS IS AWESOME!!! Hehe, its veeeeeeeery good. It does *SORTA* sound like zerg music, but is a little different from a typical zerg music. It also has sort of a techno feel to me?