one proud game, one not so proud game.

im going to leave two replays in this post., a win and a loss. between these can u tell me what i did right and what i did wrong? i would definelty love u forever if u helped me out thank you so much to whoever helps!

WIN!- View attachment a good macro game.SC2Replay -at 7 min, notice the micro. how was it? i would rlly like feedback on it.
lose- View attachment horrible game.SC2Replay

 

I'm not usually a terran player (zerg), but I can tell you what killed you there. He built tanks and extra MM while you went for medivacs. You probably should have scanned him (and when seeing the tanks, should have grabbed a few for defense. Immediately following his attack you could have countered with a drop and wiped his mineral line.

Also, I probably would have grabbed the natural rather than the expo you did. Had he scouted it out, he could have wiped all of your workers easily. With you natural you could have pulled your workers inside your base.

That's my opinion, someone else might have a better suggestion.