Next one up.

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by darkone, Oct 14, 2009.

Next one up.

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by darkone, Oct 14, 2009.

  1. darkone

    darkone Moderator

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    Waiting at the door.


    I want out,
    the door is right there.
    You're just on the other side,
    I just need turn the handle.

    I want out,
    the door is right there.
    I just can't move,
    even though you're right there.

    I want out,
    the door is right there.
    But I don't know how,
    not yet anyway.

    I want out,
    the door is right there.
    Is this really the truth, no,
    I really want is in.

    I want in,
    the door is right there.
    I'm standing just outside,
    reaching for the handle.

    I want in,
    the door is right there.
    I can see you in the window,
    I know you're just right there.

    I want in,
    the door is right there.
    But I can't turn the handle,
    because I don't yet have the key.

    I want in,
    the door is right there.
    All I need to know is,
    how long can you wait for me?

    Oct 14, 2009
     
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  2. Supahboih

    Supahboih New Member

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    you wrote that yourself?
     
  3. darkone

    darkone Moderator

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    Yea I did. Not half an hour ago. Why?

    Tis an elaborate question to someone actually.
     
  4. Aurora

    Aurora The Defiant

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    Why the forum isn't letting you in again? :/
    Or what?
     
  5. darkone

    darkone Moderator

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    Huh?

    I don't understand what you mean.
     
  6. Aurora

    Aurora The Defiant

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    Nevermind. The forum was just lagging on me again.

    What's it about then?
     
  7. darkone

    darkone Moderator

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    It's an elaborate way of asking a question of someone. Besides I write poems for her on occasion anyway.
     
  8. Supahboih

    Supahboih New Member

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    it's nice :p gj :)
     
  9. Gforce

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    interesting.
     
  10. darkone

    darkone Moderator

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    Ty.

    I keep getting told to go to a publisher.
     
  11. jasmine

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    Awww. Thanks darkone. And I've wrote you a verse back. ;)


    The door is right there.
    You really want to go through.
    You're not unable to move, you only think you are.
    This is really the truth.

    :p
     
  12. darkone

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    Not you. XD