My Mothership design.

Discussion in 'Protoss' started by bobekzea, Oct 6, 2007.

My Mothership design.

Discussion in 'Protoss' started by bobekzea, Oct 6, 2007.

  1. bobekzea

    bobekzea New Member

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    It's just the mothership from fan kit + some PS things, say what U think about it :) ::)

    [img width=600 height=497]http://img337.imageshack.us/img337/1356/mothership1oe5.jpg[/img]

    [img width=600 height=497]http://img372.imageshack.us/img372/9848/mothership2nc1.jpg[/img]

    btw: how bad that mothership from fansite kit is only 600x497 ;(
     
  2. LordKerwyn

    LordKerwyn New Member

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    The Mothership itself is interesting (i havnt made up my mind on it) but the backroud hurts my eyes.
     
  3. bobekzea

    bobekzea New Member

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    I was been trying to do smth like a star way on the background, thats why it is so bright
     
  4. BnechbReaker

    BnechbReaker New Member

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    nice work :good: though i agree with kerwyn that the background is a bit too colorful
     
  5. -LT-

    -LT- New Member

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    I'm blind!!!

    BTW Good pictures.
     
  6. bobekzea

    bobekzea New Member

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    well, if the BG is too bright, my work sux, cause at mothership i has only cuted the bg, some lights and pulled it in the MY bg, ;p
     
  7. BnechbReaker

    BnechbReaker New Member

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    don't give up, try modifying it a bit :good:
     
  8. Darth_Bane

    Darth_Bane Moderator

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    Yes I agree with everyone here and I think you did a really good job! but it really does hurt my eyes. Keep up the hard work man and you will do really well or magnificantly or good or even better!!!!
     
  9. bobekzea

    bobekzea New Member

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    ijffdrie Lord of Spam

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    only half of them are visible
     
  11. VarunaSky

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    whoa thats some bright colors, almost had a seizure looking at the first 2 but 3rd one is pretty cool
     
  12. -LT-

    -LT- New Member

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    Try making background a little less bright.
     
  13. GrahamTastic

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    AH! MY EYES!! I like the colors, but the main focus should be the Mothership.
     
  14. Wlck742

    Wlck742 New Member

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    AHHH! It's like a chameleon!
     
  15. ItzaHexGor

    ItzaHexGor Active Member

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    I reckon that you should use some pale blue colors for the background. Similar to the color of the Protoss buildings and units when they are being Warped In.
     
  16. Vindicatormsc

    Vindicatormsc New Member

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    a not so bright background would help a lot.i can't really see it because of the flashy backgrounds.make it darker,and it will be really good.
     
  17. terranupmyheart

    terranupmyheart New Member

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    its pretty blingin, my eyes grew bigger looking at it
     
  18. zeratul11

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    me eyyeees. o.0
     
  19. Wraithwatch

    Wraithwatch New Member

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    I agree, that background is entirely to bright. I need shades. :p I see what you did, and good effort, but it seriousley needs a new BG.
     
  20. ItzaHexGor

    ItzaHexGor Active Member

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    It shouldn't have a dark background because it's not like the Mothership is a Dark Templar unit or anything, and a sort of darkness wouldn't suit the normal 'High' Protoss units. It needs a softer color, something paler or lighter.