jonus's youtube channel!

Discussion in 'General StarCraft 2 Discussion' started by Jonus, Apr 30, 2011.

jonus's youtube channel!

Discussion in 'General StarCraft 2 Discussion' started by Jonus, Apr 30, 2011.

  1. Jonus

    Jonus New Member

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    jonus's youtube channel! * Free SC2 CDKEYS *

    Hello guys my name is Jonus and I am a member of VP Gamers, and I have recently started to get back into casting. Anyways I wanted everyone to check out my channel and give me some suggestions and comments about my casting so I can improve. Good or bad is fine, if you think I am just horrible that’s fine :), hopefully I will gain some fans though! Anyways I just recently posted the SGL matches between Team Soul and VP Gamers Pro Team (still a few more to upload). Check it out and let me know what you think

    www.youtube.com/jonushk

    Also if you subscribe I will be giving to cd keys away this month at random!! one on the 15th and one on the 31st of May!!!!
     
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    Some newvideos check them out! hope you enjoy :).

    Florun Vs Cuhz ( P V T )
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UQL0Jf443jo

    Frisky Vs Phate ( P V P)
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-WMLPdrd0W0

    EGStrifeco Vs EGLZgamer ( T V Z )
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XgVHjctaFBU

    Bio Vs FnaticiTT1 ( Z V P )
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HNGeEH0r1zw

    stephano Vs Cloud ( T V Z )
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=jReaBr3D25s

    EGIdra Vs oGsMc ( Z V P )
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=pnWUTSWKEe0

    LiquidTLO VS aTnSocke ( P V T)
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JaNAi_Xb8oQ

    LiquidHuk vs MouzMarrow ( Z V P )
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Ez5duwccy0

    VPBonk Vs iPBioorMech ( P V T )
    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cXBA4RTARbY
     
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    kuvasz Corrections Officer

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    I watched the Idra v Drewbie game and a few comments:
    1. The map is not Xel'naga Towers ;)
    2. Too many 'actual(ly)' and other "meaningless" words (i.e. they don't add content).
    3. At one point you said "there's going to be a lot of marines out compared to very few marines for Drewbie".
    4. You switch up words often.

    Nothing other casters don't do though. However, it'd be nice if you paid attention to these. I think these are mostly because commentators want to say too much at once. Don't rush your commentary - just talk about it at a casual pace, and keep it to the point: if you say words like 'exactly' and 'actually' they take away from your time to express content. Keep it up.
     
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    haha thanks for the feedback :), Helps a lot!

    haha I didn't even realize I said towers until you said that lol. Kinda funny. Caverns... towers... its all the same rightt :)

    and yeah that is one thing that bugs me a lot when I say certain words wayyyyyyyy to often I am def working on that...

    another thing I do is say UM A lot I need to stop that :). Anyways thank you once again for all the info and I hope you keep watching :).