this thread is for people who like a fictional universe and want to give it their own twist by making up a story. here is mine for stargate: This story takes place after the Ancients came to pegasus, but before the Wraith. The alliance headquarters was in Heliopolis. The alliance of four races was once balanced; The mighty Asgard guarded the borders with their supreme battlecruisers and weaponry, giving the other races the peace they needed to work; The ingenious Alterans were the brains behind the alliance, they studied all that was found, and dreamed about what was yet to come, they provided the will to expand their limits to the other races; The illoustrous Nox took care of all that was and will be, loving nature, and thus by an extent, life itself, they provided happyness and kept the alliance from straying too far; The fourth race were the numerous Furlings, who spread life amongst the stars, they were the fuel behind the alliance..... But one day, the day of the burning stars, the Furlings went to far in their expansion and the Nox commanded them to stop, becuase they were destroying nature. The Furlings became angry at the Nox, becuase they were like spoiled children, they had always gained what they wanted. In one thorough strike the Furlings drove the Nox back to their home planet, where the Nox lived in peace, mistrusting the other "young" races. The Asgard were furious, and without the peacefull Nox to calm their temper, decided to destroy the Furlings. but the Furlings had found a Nox starport, containing thousands of small fighters, with which they attacked the Asgard fleet. Hundreds of Furlings were destroyed, but there was no way the Asgard could win, so their charred fleet returned to their home galaxy of Ida. The Nox, the Asgard, and the Alterans met once more one year after the day of the burning stars, trying to decide what to do, but they were helpless becuase they required the Furlings, so they could have a populace to serve again. Three days later the meeting was over and nothing had been decided, except that the races would search for a fourth race seperately. The Asgard decided to watch over the Milkyway humans, and placed their trust in them. The Alterans tried to create the perfect fourth race by making new, improved humans. The Nox trusted nature and waited for the fourth race. But, once the Furlings heard of their removal from the alliance, they decided to strike against the last unscarred race of the alliance; the Alterans. At first they tried to contact the Ori, so they could recreate their ancient plague, but there embassaries were captured and through a brainscan, the secret of ascension, which the Alterans had recently discovered, was sucked from their brains, and the Ori now knew how to ascend, the topic that caused a philosophical gap in their race long ago. After the defeat of the Asgard, the Furlings traveled to Pegasus, becuase they heard of a deadly creature, the Iratus bug, that sucked life out of humans. The Alterans used an dna decoder to study the bug. The Furlings killed the Alteran using the device and blended a human girl, and a pregnant bug into the fearsome wraith,which they gave a captured Nox ship so they could reproduce undetected. The Wraith later reverse engineered this Nox ship to discover how to make organic ships. The Furlings returned to their galaxy, and spreading like rabbits, they colonized an entire cluster of galaxies. But 4 years ago, Atlantis was reactivated and a subspace message was send out to call back all ships, including the one in the possesion of the Furlings, which they had used to travel to Heliopolis. Now they have returned, seeking revenge for the alliance halting their development.
hmm, are you going to add more? well done! and this thread is perfect for my newest project... it will be my little baby story after making love to the book The Dream Merchants (mostly the sister of the main character... yay undead females!) i'm hoping to base it off of either A) the dream universe, B) the history of the Tembe, or C) the future of the dream universe.
also from stargate, this is the start of one day in sokar's life: Slowly the darkness faded away, and he found himself inside a white box, a sarcophagus. Sokar heard the rough stone corners of the cover as the device opened, revealing him to his people, his slaves. Slowly he rose from the ancient device, but somehow he felt different this time. First he looked through the Pel'tak window of the landed Ha'tak, seeing his army prepare for the battle against the system lords. Than he turned around, towards his priests and his first prime, but as he looked they were all startled, and tried to stay as far away from his as they could. This pleased Sokar, although he didnt know why he wanted his slaves to fear him, the day before he only wanted to bring fear to the hearts of his enemies. "Cree, Jaffa, bring me my sustanance" he yelled towards the priests, and one scared priest gave him a jar, filled with young symbiotes, his own children. Slowly he put his hand in the jar and grabbed one of the parasitic creatures, forcing it to look in the eyes of his father. Than Sokar broke his neck, and sucked the flesh out of his skin. The unnamed symbiote screamed for the last time as he felt it's life flow away. The priest walked towards the jar again, wanting to pick it up, as he never killed more than one symbiote, but Sokar felt Anger, and he told the priest: "Stop, i want them to suffer more." the priest was startled and backed away quickly, as Sokar bended over the jar, and in the reflection of the water, he saw what had scared his priest; The eyes of his host became bloodred, a bodily error that the sarcaphogus should have prevented. Than Sokar pierced the watery surface with his hands grabbing yet another symbiote, this one stolen from Ra's forces, and crushing it in his handpalm, but still, Sokar felt anger, a need to do something, something... evil! coming next: Sokar torturing a Tau'ri
