bronze newbie Protos lf assistance

Hi all I decided to register just to ask this question, I recently start playing as protos and I terribad I was hoping some of you give me some assistance of what Im doing wrong and give me maybe some tips or something
I hope i posted this in the correct category,
Thanks all in advance

here is a link to my recent lost
http://rapidshare.com/files/441779382/fail.SC2Replay

 

General tips that I've recieved (and still need ot practice):

1. Build a few probes and get your economy up and running FAST.

2. The first thing you should build (after a couple pylons) is a gateway or two.

3. Mass produce Zealots and Stalkers. Only build a forge for upgrades and Photon Cannons.

I still need to work on that...I keep wanting to build Immortals DX

 

I dont think I had any problems with these tips you gave me .. i want to believe I had great economy had pleny of army ( i think?) had some upgrades also, the problem I guess it I didnt harass at all and I attack at the wrong time, Im just hoping a more experienced player give me some advice regarding this

 

A link I posted for Alsojames to see 1 min ago on another thread with videos containing tons of helpful stuff for the begginer(and not only) player is here:
http://www.starcraft2forum.org/forums/showthread.php?p=393339#post393339

And damn, someday I'll make a compilation thread of such stuff and ask it to be stickied since such threads tend to pop up like mushrooms, lolz

Btw, if you have doubts on your judgement of your own replays, feel free to upload some here, tell us what your judgement is and ask how the community can help.

 

oddly enough your econ was great, the issue was you took no advantage of having 4 bases vs his two. you then made gateways robo stargates and whatever the citidel of adun is now called. basically you built everything then waited 15 min so the other guy could catch up. the simple thing to do is build and army then go attack. when you have as much money as you had just build 20 gateways and when all your guys die make 20 more. simply attack more when you have 4 bases cause if they dont have four bases they cannot keep up with you, but if you get to 200 food then wait 10 min they can also be at 200 food and you have lost all advantage and will just die. also as you move out of the mid game area you want to throw the gateway units at him so you can build large numbers of collosus immortals and phonexis cause you have 4 bases you can do this late game.

in sumery have a plan something you focus on and then go do it, and be less hesitant about attacking