Another drawing project

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by Ursawarrior, Mar 5, 2009.

Another drawing project

Discussion in 'The Arts' started by Ursawarrior, Mar 5, 2009.

  1. Ursawarrior

    Ursawarrior New Member

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    well, you all saw what i can do at MSpaint, but ive never tried to trace/draw anything on photoshop

    so, i got my pen and started doodling

    so this is what i drew (took with phone camera)
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    and this is the progress i made now, i edited and improve some parts from the original drawing
    [​IMG]

    i cant wait to finish this!
     
  2. AcE_01

    AcE_01 Active Member

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    ooo nice

    btw i think the head is abit too small for the hair and all...lewlz

    or....theres just too much hair.
     
  3. Ursawarrior

    Ursawarrior New Member

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    yeah, i think the hair is way too far apart from each other

    and should i go for the camouflage pants?

    edit: done with the body, now with details and the sword
    [​IMG]
     
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  4. Kaaraa

    Kaaraa Space Junkie

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    Cool stuff, Ursa.

    So is the sword slung over his back, or is he holding it with the hand we can't see?
     
  5. Ursawarrior

    Ursawarrior New Member

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    its hung over his back, i just forgot to add a strap in the original drawing
    and the sword is going to be a toughie, coz its hard to determine its angle
     
  6. Kaaraa

    Kaaraa Space Junkie

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    Maybe you should flip the sword around, so the blade is on the right side instead of the left.
     
  7. Hayden351

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    I drawed this on paper then put it drawed it on my computer.

    file2.JPG

    i think i'll revive the colors and change the position of some things.

    I think your picture is turning out nicely exept one thing in your drawing you couldn't see his face.
     
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  8. Ursawarrior

    Ursawarrior New Member

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    hmmmm... i think flipping the sword is a nice idea thanks karaa
    and yeah hayden, i couldnt draw his face at the time because it was on pen and i couldnt erase it if i screw up
     
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    Oh so you have the face becuse you meant to have the face in the original but couldn't becuse you have a pen.
     
  10. Space Pirate Rojo

    Space Pirate Rojo New Member

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    Canada, eh?
    Feet look a little small, face looks too small for the head, but otherwise.

    Crisp, clean, and refreshed version of your old picture, keep it up.
     
  11. PancakeChef

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    I agree with Space Pirate Rojo that there are some proportion problems with it such as the feet, head, and arms. The hands look a little too blocky as well and the artwork looks too stiff. What is good about is the detail and smoothness of the line art.
     
  12. Hayden351

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    I agree with PancakeChef and Rojo the Space Pirate
     
  13. Gandromidar

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    I love it, the sword looks awesome but I agree with the 3 previous with some proportion issues. Once thats fixed it'll be even more awesome:D